All Comments on 'Silya & The Dragon Ch. 03'

More please. Very nice. I can't wait to hear a out the brother n witch

I'll be checking back daily :) can't wait to read more

Thighs don't fit inside vaginas with as few repercussions as that. I mean sure, he could get it there, but without some heavy magic, she would just be dying, orgasms or not. She gave birth with no dilation, violently, repeatedly.

So: Hurray for magic dicks!

I am enjoying reading your story so far. The main problem I keep seeing is that you repeat phrases multiple times very close to each other for instance, in 2 successive paragraphs, you described his head (cock) as bulbous as well as one different adjective in each paragraph. This is just one example from this chapter. If you work on not repeating phrases like that, this story will be much cleaner (not referring to clean as sex free).

Great concept. LOVE the story. PLEASE write more soon ?

That was wonderful and the responsive connection I was looking for. Cannot wait for chapter4. The details are fantastic. So arousing.thank you

As sensuous as I would like to envision the sexual encounter between the two of them, I cannot imagine how she survived.

going on her own to the market, meeting with her family, and walking among the friends of her ex is not a good idea, but you knew that and set it up for us anyway.

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Kinda agree with Rightbank on her going to the market but over all really good so far.

If I ignored the fact you already told us his size in comparison to Silya and just enjoyed the story, that was hot sex. But....you set the parameters and then shattered them. So how does this work? By rights she should be dead or severely injured from wild sex with a dragon!!! Could've dragged it out longer before they got to mate. Wouldn't have hurt the story you know. I look forward to the next chapter.

don't listen to faithwhite this is an absolutely amazing series

This storyline is fantastic, and I definitely cannot wait for this to continue, but little mishaps in the details are a little annoying (i.e.: The penis would have ripped her in half, just size variations (at one point the reader easily imagines him similar size because of his motions but when described, he is bigger), or how he sneaks around to get the medicine and clothing successfully, when he's 3 times bigger than Silya, maybe 16 feet tall). Besides these obvious little bits that irk me, I love this story. Hell, those kinds of things might even be done on purpose. How would the readers know if it's a dream, or if it takes place in a world where a female's vagina can expand at whim, or even if the dragon has some secrets? Maybe he can actually change but he doesn't want to in front of Silya. He knows she will fall for him in that form even more, but he cannot protect her while human? The point is, we don't know. You are the writer so keep doing what you do :) Please do not take this as me degrading your work. You have the guts to post writing so I say "Bravo". Also, this is merely my opinion written as constructive criticism. Other than that, onward and upward, because I want to read more of this wonderful tale :D

Love this, please finish this great work, I find it Damn hot! Almost classy by dragon porn standards!

Are you guys/gals ready for familial betrayal? Cause I am.

Next chapter?