All Comments on 'Simon's Strict Unseen Mistress'

Great fantasy story!

This was a great start. It could have used a bit more detail and a bit more length but still a great start for a first? submission. Please continue.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Thank you for sharing your story with us and please write more -- it was very good indeed. Five stars from me -- and thanks again!

There's so little detail because he's blindfolded. He cant see the room hes in. Hot though.

This story fills me with anticipation! The pacing is great. I hate to be that guy, but you need to use double quotation marks when someone speaks.