All Comments on 'Simply His Ch. 13-15'

This story is coming along great! The submission process sucks! I am on edge on a daily basis.

I love it

Just wish the chapters were longer. Can't wait for the next installment.

Looks like I will just have to keep myself busy until the next chapters post!

Just letting you all know I already submitted chapters 16 to 18th! I submit them the same day I see the last ones up here in Lit, so it is a matter of just waiting a few more days :)

For those asking me when are they finally mating, geez :P I warned you is a slow burner! haha... I really want to show Meadow as someone real, and if I were her, I would have gone crazy with internal questions and doubts, about him and myself. Dont worry tho, as she says in the last line, the final walls are now gone ;)

Stopping by to add my vote! :)

If weres age one year for every 30 human years... That makes Caleb 6 years old. If he were to appear 18 in human years, he would be 540 years old, not over 200. I know I'm being nit picky, but just something that stood out to me.

Overall though I'm enjoying the story

If he stopped aging at say 20 that would make him look about 26 so it is a possibility if you would factor that in. Yes it could have been explained a bit more, but it is written how it is written.