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I think this is a good piece of descriptive writing. It's always a challenge - for me anyway - to write something with minimal dialog.

I'm not sure if it's formatting, but would help to split the paragraphs a bit more? Makes easier reading for those of us with short attention spans.

The punch line at the end I'm guessing was about you being such a good lover, others wanted a share? Nice touch, but I had to read it a couple of times to get it; but then again I'm slow!

K

I have to agree with Kisandra about paragraphs and the difficulty of writing strictly from the narrative.

Heck I am hard good job. 83

Is this real or made up? If so, please tell me the location

Is this real? If so please tell me where