by Cocktopia
Dom = male
Domme = female
Twink - not huge bald muscular, and generally not hung like a horse. Generally smaller stature, thin build, effeminate/cute/pretty.
Your in-charge character's sex appeal was destroyed long before she made a face.
"...and without doubt psychotic." It is your story, but since you opened it to comments...have to say that I think the author of this story is psychotic.
Disturbingly psychotic.
At least learn something about what you're writing. It's clear from this rant that you have no clue.
Good jack-off story...Maybe a little rough for me....