All Comments on 'Sister-in-law Comes to Stay Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keep up the story

I hope he makes Jill and only Jill pregnant in the next chapter. It would be hot and add some drama with Margaret for Jill to pregnant instead of her. Margaret would have to work harder to please her husband

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
EXCELLENT SECOND STORY

Please continue the series

Jill needs to move into their home

JagnagJagnagabout 6 years ago
One lucky bugger

Love it ....

Great story .... but .! Who the fuck has meetings till late on a friday night ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Anatomy

"Now Margaret removed her knickers and moved herself to sit astride me, facing Jill." ...

"I had my tongue extended downwards, flat against her slit and my nose pressed up against her clitoral area."

Since Jill was at first occupying the mid-territory of his body, there's something strange about the anatomy here. But I have not been so detailed with that many girls, so I should possibly not rule out that some clits are mounted at the back ....?

Other than that - it's well written.

Spaniard2017Spaniard2017about 6 years agoAuthor
Whoops!

Good point. Or maybe he just has a very long tongue. :)

Rancher46Rancher46almost 3 years ago

Hot story, but what's up with the change in Margaret's attitude of sex. Is the sister moving in? Well done 5 stars

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