All Comments on 'Sister Massage Turns Erotic'

Wish it was longer and more explicit.

nice story, well written, believable.

I can't imagine after something like that happens, how you couldn't make it happen again.

mom's noses are unbelievable, aren't they?

I don't want to be mean if English is not your first language, but this was very poorly written, and it's not just typos, which I can forgive if they aren't totally distracting.

I am the first to admit my grammar and punctuation is not the best. I have a Master's degree in Mathematics and Physics. I hated composition class.

I thought the point of this website is to share erotic stories not judge writing ability. I do know things could flow better. I am trying to do better. I have been lucky with my sexual exploits so I thought I would share them.

Some want more information or think I should have gone on to doing more. But like this story nothing happened again between me and my sister.

I like this because it's not written as a fictional "story", it's more of an account. And a hot one at that.

Don't let these clowns talking about "grammar and spelling" get you down. What kill-joys. They must be really popular at parties.

Great job, I hope you keep writing!

We are not paying a dime to read only idiots who haven't added any writings of their own would say something negative. I call them idiots because there is no proof they can do better.

How about another chapter continuing from there?

A lot of possibilities.