All Comments on 'Sister Surprise Ch. 02'

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TJSkywindTJSkywindover 6 years ago
David's rather emotional

Good thing his sisters are level-headed.

The sisters were already talking about sharing him after college in something permanent. If he keeps his mouth shut, that can still happen. But, I'm a sucker for a happy ending.

Thanks for sharing. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

That was a bit over the top. Why is david so ridiculous? His temperament shouldnt so completely over emotional that hes annoying the entire chapter. Kind of losing its luster.

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
Of course we all knew they would be brother and sister. Now what

David is in shock.

Can't wait to see how you handle this.

I am excited!

Hurry with the next chapter.

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
So excited I forgot to finish.

Like others I want a happy ending.

Can they all live together?

How will the 3 sets OF parents handle the news?

Hope all the families agree.

Have fun with the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amused

I like the story line and now want to see the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very good

Dont make us wait to long.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
DUH!

Didn't see that one coming. DUH!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Way too predictable

But okay I guess.. At least better than most story, which are also predictable. It's free and I won't complain much

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