All Comments on 'Sisterly Love'

you ruined it with the 42c tits. 42 is huge and a c cup would look tiny on her not sexy at all keep it believable

more please

42C Really???

Why didn't you just write a story about the Hunchfront of Notre Dame, because that's what she must have looked like! Please explain how a 5'6" girl with a slim frame could even stand up without toppling over with monster jugs like those things out front, I just get a mental image of a broomstick with two basketballs nailed to it! A little reality please...

fast and nasty

This theme has been done so many times now it's become boring. This story was written without caring about spelling and grammar or developing even the semblance of a plot, it reads like it was written in ten minutes on the back of a napkin. I suggest taking it down, spending some time thinking about it, rewrite it and then get it checked by an editor.

Some mistakes, but not many. Overall very nice short story.

How to be seduced 101, most men are are quite easy to manipulated, set up over time, just like war prisoner are broken down but much more being nice naive, the female pheromones increases has quite effect on young man along with their hormones at their peak.