by ilikeherhot
Good, the wimp sissy boy has film of the bitch fucking around on him. That will go great in the divorce court.
Give it as a gift to the bitch wife?
Better yet why not kill the asshole and the bitch.?
Yea, story sucked and is similar to the garbage that the want-be-author Azpiri and his fag side-kick Wonder_One spew out. Quit writing!
Love your story, came on it several times. Don't listen to others, keep writing, keep fantasying....many will appreciate it
There seemed to be no emotional involvement from the 1st person narrator of the story. It seemed to be a standard, insert tab A into slot B and voila, orgasm. The only interesting part was the twist at the end that it was all planned.
Nice story.........The guy that advised you to quit writing.......let me make a suggestion with your blessing............Quit reading!
Not very believable.
I would think if that was his main goal he would have had a better observation place rather sneaking around like a little wimp.