All Comments on 'Skin Spectrum Ch. 02'

by EgyptsGoddess

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Not the father-in-law...

And no sharing, please. Your story makes an excellent political and social statement, without the other stuff. By the way, you could have had her speak to the dragons, and use them for protection, rather than allowing the other two to be killed. Just a suggestion, in case you would like to do a revision.

EgyptsGoddessEgyptsGoddessabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks, I think...

Sorry you didn't care for the story as it was written. Thank you for the suggestion. Thank you for commenting.

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