by Mystories189
Just a sick story by someone who doesn't know how to write.
Husband might as well pack his bag because this couple is done-put a fork into it. Wife will never stop at 1 lover.. Soon husband will washing her lover's socks.
And if she lost 50 or 60 lbs, she would lose her breasts. You do know that, right? And what the hell is a nursing assistant? Do nurses have assistants? And why was she living at her parents house 2 years after college? And why the hell would this hot, built guy with a 12" pecker be a lowly assistant? Why not a doctor, a lawyer, a porn star?
This was a waste of time to read and to write.
It will get read, and you will get the comments it deserves, including these bad ones because it was a very bad story.. sorry but if you write a good one, you can bask in glory
That was kind of stupid, the guy gets off with 2 strokes on his little dick? No wonder she wants to cheat.
What else is new? Bonnie, the whore, is at it again.
Story looks like it was written in five minutes by a cuck fag idiot..... Worst ever....
I've seen some bad days in this category , but today's crop ranks with the very worst of them.
This was an interesting story-line; however, it was riddled with typos, gramatical errors and generally weak writing.
Keep writing but, please get some editing help. Writing is just like working out at the gym. The more you do it, the stronger you get.
Not only does she disrespect her hubby with words but then she goes and fucks the guy even after he verbally abused he hubby trying to humiliate him. I never hit a girl in my life but in hubbys position it would've been difficult not to . She will only escalate from here go to divorce attorney. Lover boy would be surprised when he gets a bat across his knee while leaving work one night. I'd rather do time in jail than allow anyone to abuse and humiliate me like that.
leads to marital problems but not if you are flexible. TK U MLJ LV NV
I printed the story and took a nice sloppy SHIT on it. The story was fucking shit.
I found it interesting and would love to see it developed further.....with more involving the hubby....I think he may want Jim as much as the wife does....It has been quite some time since that story was submitted....follow-up with more.
Loved it, it was almost as though it was describing real experiences, which is my favourite type of erotic literature.