All Comments on 'Slave Heart'

by Shadow_Kyss

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Lovely...

and the feeling of the collaring is very erotic and you captured it very well. Thank you for sharing and yes..i would like to see some more written in bdsm. You have a great gift. respectfully a fan in Texas

Knight_FireKnight_Fireover 18 years ago
simply amazing

your writing is so filled with passion everything I have read from you is full of passion. Keep up the good work.

Mode09Mode09over 18 years ago
Intense Story

This story has such intense feelings, rare to be found in any story, nowadays.

Mode09Mode09over 18 years ago
intense story

A really intense story, just about perfect detailed feelings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
a tender brush

just reading made my body tingle . . .it is deeply felt breathless . . . and without words . . . it was a pleasure to read

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
WOW!

wow, that was hot. she makes me wish she were mine. the thought of doing all that, then fastening the collar on her beautiful neck, with my cock pressing against her soft ass cleavage is intoxicating and makes me short of breath. i am dying to hear what happened next.

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