All Comments on 'Slave Leah Pt. 01'

Please keep writing, good story plot, well written.

Has potential but she gave in way to quick . She should be difficult and resentful . And there needs to be more background but all in all, I'm waiting for next chapter will look forward to it .

Well written and well worth the read.

As noted by another, the erotic passage and Leah's internal submission happen quickly. But I think this is a quality writer posting for the first time to Literotica, who was anxious to demonstrate erotic potential. She did.

SamanthaKat's a great addition to Literotica and I eagerly anticipate her future posts!

If someone got an offer like that, the person would rush out and at least think it over or take the risk and then talk to her father. This is a weak point. The other weak point is the auto-submission syndrome plaguing many domination or supposedly "non-consent" stories , where the heroine (though in many cases there is none, as the outcome is not good at the end) immediately says, I enjoyed it, therefore I am submissive, uh, uh, ah and from them on act totally like dumbed down automatons. But the writer could do some adjustments in the next part. Keep up writing!