All Comments on 'Slave to Akuma Ch. 01'

by vaultdweller111

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Hopefully there's a followup and if so, it doesn't get that fucked up. Any kind of succubus that reminds me of Purgatori I wanna see more of!

evebroughtanaxthistimeevebroughtanaxthistimeover 7 years ago

Can I play too?

Shot for story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
short

If you can't go farther than that why bother.

sithonsithonover 7 years ago
Promising

Could be good. You need to expand on Jason's character though . more back story.

sensualwhisperssensualwhispersover 7 years ago
Story

Appalling grammar. Point of view messed up and too short for a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Creative!

Usually it is female sacrificed to demon, but gender reversal turns it into really original story. Hopefully there will be more soon^^ Is she going to tied him down, have her way and fuck with her tail?)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

This is a nice opening

WakeupaliceWakeupaliceover 5 years ago

Please make part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
short

Why did you stop ? To hear what the succubus did to him would make this an excellent story. How could you leave us hanging like this ?

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