by spankedboy
I enjoyed this second chapter, Tarek -- thank you for sharing it with me. Your writing is very straight-forward. The story is beautiful - very strong images come into my head. They could be heightened if you added a few more descriptive words to your actions. Adjectives make the erotic world go 'round, eh?
Tarek ?
Though we call it kaan mola this side of the border ......
Anon, thank you so much for your comment and the feedback. It helps so much in improving writing.
Ashesh9, ah my number 1 fan is back.
Waiting for next chapters. I hope there will be many of them.
I've enjoyed parts 1&2. I hope 3 will be coming soon. I like the way you are keeping Rubina close by and obviously aware of what is going on. Good tease. Your writing is very good also. You're not letting your technique mar the story telling. I imagine many more events in Baba's training.
Rubina would probably masturbate at her bath even more if she knew she was being spied on by Tarek. Though the humiliation of knowing he had seen her spread open and massaging her inner lips might bring her over the edge.
He gets to see a girl his age in the nude AND gets caned. Probably his best day yet!
Thank you for the comments. I do consider myself fortunate to have enjoyed the charms of both Rubina and Rashida, albeit in a very unique manner. I loved Rashida, and still dream of her big buttocks, and of Rubina's sneering tone and her firm butt.
This story gets better every time I read it! The kind of authority that Rashida manifests of Tarek is magnificent. How willingly Tarek succumbs is a treat. He intentionally does things so as to induce punishment upon himself. I kinda envy him as well given that he has Rashida in her life. She trains him, with a motive to make him into a better person. It's all about the methodology that she used. The best one at that.
This series is my all time fav series.
Regards,
Anil
Anil, I was indeed lucky to have Rashida in my life. I will be honest and say that though SOME times I did things to get me punished, on the whole I was careful to obey the maid and please her. Her punishments could be severe! I did not want her to cane me 50 strokes of the cane!
I've always called an older maid bua or apu if she's close to my age.
The story was hot.
expecting much more dominant work between maid and the boy on next, also a hardcore sex. that should have to started between them..........
I had lot of fantasies from my maid. Slowly and slowly, all of them were realized.