All Comments on 'Slayer's Wolf Ch. 03'

love this story and hope to see another chapter soon. pls pls soon.

Now both Leon and Alex have found their mates in both Sky and Cloe. Both men are Were's while both women are Vamps. And if that's not enough, Sky is a slayer to Alpha Leon and his pack. And now both men are set to "get acquainted" w/the girls at a bar?

Enjoying the story and hope to get more soon. If you weren't writing such a good story, I wouldn't want more. hehe-he

More pls

More please.... I'm loving this story and still giggling about the 'anecdote'! - on a par with 'don't call me Shirley'.

So, as and when you're ready, I'll be waiting :)

i'm so glad you're back! this story is really good so far and i can't wait for the next installment! wait, are the ladies vampires? i thought she killed her partner because he was a vampire. i know the friend is a witch, i'll just go back and read again. oh well, lucky me! great story so far pixxie, hope to hear more from you real soon.

Hi everyone, I should have the next chapter up in the next day or two. And for corrections, Sky is a Slayer not a vampire and Cloe is a witch. Leon and Alex are werewolves and thats all you need to know right now ;) thanxz! ----pixxie <3

but the chapters are way too short.

More faster please, and i like where this is going( and longer would not hurt)

what with the long wait and the 1 chapter???????

Please get an editor or at least someone to proofread your work. Its chp 3 and you are still making the same mistakes. Example: she's mines. no s on mine.

That being said I like the storyline.

You need an editor.

"Fuck you bitch."

What kind of woman talks to her friends like that? Is this intentional? (Do you WANT your main characters to come across as low class/common?)