All Comments on 'Sleep Well My Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice!

That's what I need. Good read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Betterings

For the sake of variety,could use more different terms or the primary sexual organs.

Pleasant enough foreplay description; short shrift given to to the coming down off the mountain, making the guy look like a clueless f*ck-'em-then-roll-over-and-snooze jerk.

Slipshod editing, with about a dozen grammar, diction, punctuation, and negligent-

rereading errors.

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