by Shehasnicebutt2
For the sake of variety,could use more different terms or the primary sexual organs.
Pleasant enough foreplay description; short shrift given to to the coming down off the mountain, making the guy look like a clueless f*ck-'em-then-roll-over-and-snooze jerk.
Slipshod editing, with about a dozen grammar, diction, punctuation, and negligent-
rereading errors.