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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I really liked it! Big fan of the setting/premise, even if it was just a short story. Would've liked a little more focus on the sexual acts and the descriptions of them, seemed they were kinda glossed over as opposed to the longer descriptions as in the Dawn of a Perfect Empire (which I loved) or a Demonstration

demonsfire813demonsfire813over 4 years ago

So weirdly awesome lol!

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