All Comments on 'Slim Girl to Fat Bitch Ch. 10'

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Lacking any type of cleverness or eroticism there was nothing to draw the reader into this mess. Lines like "she petted the pussy" just made me laugh inappropriately. In the end I really didn't care who was doing what to whom. Nothing interesting or entertaining happened and therefore the story was a waste of time to read. No stars.