All Comments on 'Slip Of The Towel'

I'll never get back.

Just Depressing

You are developing a good skill. Keep it up. Stories in this vein are very helpful to others as well as yourself

That's what happens when a man goes into cold water which is obviously what happened even though it's not mentioned that the water was cold. So yeah of course he's going to be small. It's nothing to laugh at, it's a matter of the body reacting to temperature. To make a humiliation story out of it is just pathetic.

at last a story you wrote that I genually like.

I didn’t bother to look at your other stories but if they’re like this one, just stop writing. Just stop. That’s not an ending — it’s not even a story.