All Comments on 'Sloppy Seconds'

This story doesn't realy have any feeling to it, sorry.

Third rate story on a site that has now become a joke,look at the stories that were written 4 years ago,this is graffiti compared to them

Keep writing

Yes , yes !! sloppy seconds with your own Mom . Heaven !

Whoa, masterfully fetishized. Rated a 5.

a boy like Sean will take it any way he can get it. Don't matter that some other guy's been up there before him. Just so long as mom spreads her legs and welcomes her baby boy's big hard cock, just so long as baby boy can blow his hot young balls up where he was once a baby and flood his mother's warm wet ever-loving twat with his creamy semen, everything's right as rain.

What a waste of time.

So his mom is a whore and he wants sloppy seconds. Big deal.

No story line at all.

Try again.

I'll try giving constructive criticism. The story had very little flow. Bro came out and suddenly wanted to fuck is mom. Ok but why how when did both of em get horny about each other? Those aren't all that important but the description is seriously lacking. It IS an erotica. I'd like more details. And why was mom a whore? Money? Then why did she quit just cause son promised to do better? Everything went as fast as me cumming...