All Comments on 'Slow and Painful Ch. 03'

Thanks for your story, looking out for the next chapter! Please continu your road of extremity ;)

Amazing! I'll be checking back every hour or so for the next installment. I cant wait!

Then learn how to write. Bad characters acting without rhyme or reason and spouting dialogue written by ten year old. And look at the scores and views. You're getting mediocre scores and the number of views has fallen from 14,000 in the first chapter to just over 4000 for this lousy chapter. Nobody likes this drivel. Give it a rest and stop posting.

I read the first three chapters hoping for improvement but it just keeps getting worse.

Fred really had a cummie snack...