All Comments on 'Slut Mommie Ch. 12'

BETTER AND BETTER Loved it

OMG! What you do to me with your writing! I got so excited seeing a new submission from you! Kate is everything I want and everything I want to be!!! The height of eroticism and sexuality is beyond intense. I read your stories with a racing heart and shortness of breath. All I can say is "Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!" and "Please write more and more often!"

It was great to see another chapter from you. Been missing it but the wait was worth it. It was smokin hot!!!! Keep it up.

great story....too long... more soon... please

Absolutely fantastic. Worth waiting for. For months legions of your fans have been checking the site daily for an update and it was worth it. Am full of admiration for your writing. thank-you, amd more soon please!

write a book i will buy it

everyone will

fucking amazing

The best M-slut story by far. Love the buildups in each chapter. Please continue writing!

very nice stories l have really enjoyed them.. would be the best storie l have read.. and thank you for them.

This story just gets better with each part. I hope the daughter uses her new toys on her slut of a mother or her father

What a great series! My cock was hard and dripping the whole time reading all the chapters. Please keep the stories coming(ha ha)! Good stuff.

What a GREAT Series....very exciting and details are exciting....Cant wait to read more....

It has got to be time for another instalment of this series.

please for fuck sake (and for mine) hurry with mommie slut 13 and 14 etc, etc.

Just finished the 12 chapters and wow was that hot

Its like your writing just pushes the button in my brain labeled 'cum'

I dont even have to pay attention. I can be distracted, I don't have to touch myself. I just let my eyes look at the words and my dick shoots out white stuff. Its like a zen master trick or something (yours, to know how to light up circuits in my brain)

I'm actually printing this out so I can take it to the sperm bank with me

I read this when it was new and it's still awesome. I've been reading Lit for maybe three years and Fantasy69's stories rate as some of my absolute favorites.

SOOOOOOOOOO GLAD THAT MOM AND DAUGHTER ARE FINALLY ADMITTING THEIR LUST FOR EACH OTHER, NOW WE STILL HAVE TO HAVE A ROUND WITH DAD AND BRO, WHY NOT?

love the story especially when mom is licking and sucking her daughter's pussy and ass! made my cock hard!

Great pacing. Consistent, very good content.

Top 5 story for me.

after kristy and her mother watched tommy and gina

and then when kristy went to take her bath I would have liked to have read that while kristy was in the tub she masturbated thinking about her brothers big cock and all she could think of was planning ways to get her mother to do a threesome with tommylike she and her mom were doing with dad or maybe she could join tommy and gina in a threeway

Mother (mother) (3)

her boyfriends Mom (boyfriend’s) (mom) (3)

Mommie (Mommie)

Dad (dad) (3)

tea shirt (T-shirt) (3)

tea shirts (T-shirts)

followed his suite (suit)

half way (halfway)

quite (quiet) (2)

Cumming (cumming) (4)

mare thought (mere)

Mind as well (Might)

myself confidence (my self-confidence)

Kristy set down (sat)

slumped tiered (tired)

laying (lying)

naval (navel)

blind fold (blindfold)

head board (headboard)

spread eagle (spread-eagle)

which he couldn't stroke (-it) anymore

pulpous (bulbous) (WRONG WORD CHOICE!!!!)

Father's (father’s)

damned up stream (dammed)

couldn't stand the site (sight)

herd her (heard)

where ever (wherever)

tine rear hole (tiny)

blindfolds (blindfold)

dads (dad’s)

stead rhythm (steady)

licked her...liked her (licked)

even better I know where this is going and cant wait

Wondering if mom is ever going to get fucked again.

GREAT Stories, but you desperately need a proofreader/editor... soo many simple grammatical, punctuation, and spelling errors...

Such as High HEALS (high heels)... TEA shirt (Tee-shirt or T-shirt)... simile (Smile).. pulpous head(Bulbous)...

I love them all. You make everything sound so hot. My husband and I take time to read them out loud to each other he said that my way of reading them is the best. I enjoy watching him get a hard on we know these are not real people no one would have sex with there son the way she did.

still the best story out there. wish you would finish

Easily one of the very best stories on this web site! Each chapter is well written and sexy as hell! Great job!

This story needs to be made into the most epic porn movie ever asap