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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Slutty pussy

Thanks for a great story. I just love that slutty pussy. I like a liberated woman who knows what she likes.

kennyboy82kennyboy82about 10 years ago
Worthy of far more than a mere 5 stars!

Incredibly good! One of the best stories charting the steady progress of a white wife towards her ultimate goal of being a true slut wife. I'm dying to read some more of this, hopefully there are many more chapters to follow!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Interesting take

Open marriage is of course that only sane way to have one. The never ending problem is the control freak game. That is the same for a twinkie marriage and an open one. Interesting to see how Tim adapts. That's what every adult man does all his life. Realizing and accepting the woman has all the power and his happiness is a by product of yielding to her. The usual old queens will soon be here screaming about slut, bitch, skanky wife, but those old queens serve no purpose but to make us laugh.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
It baffles me how

these scenarios always twist facts and emotions around to "force" acceptance that "this" is the "best" or only answer. THERE IS NEVER ONLY JUST ONE ANSWER!!! However, the bullshit justifications are actually what I read a story like this for. As I read, listening to the author's perspective of what might bring two characters to the brink cementing in this unnatural fetish, I enjoy arguing against it in my own mind. OF COURSE, the obvious answer for Tim is to get the fuck out and away from her, but he will stay to have his sexuality controlled. Hmm...

What is missing is the need for her to compartmentalize her emotions, to keep herself from getting hurt. Understanding that Tim WILL be hurt, well that is just part of the process. This perspective is needed from a "better him than me" standpoint. If she hurts him, it is OK, to prevent herself from getting hurt. She gets guilt free slut sex, and he has to put up with it. What is missing is how she can justify hurting him in the process. The relationship is only open for a few months, and she is ready to permanently walk away from Tim - IF he can't handle it?? How does she rectify that opening the marriage up has , in fact, made it weaker? When it is ONLY better for HER, how in the hell can it be better for THEM??? I'm not sure if you intended your story to champion this lifestyle, but you HAD to understand that people would be critical of the logic and thought processes of your characters? Are these characters fashioned after people who have figured it out? If "Tim" could be convinced, could you convince me, the reader? (Hell no, but I'd like to see your best effort to try!!!) The most telling thing is Tim's realization that sex with her AFTER she has been out with another man is better than his memory of sex with her after they have been out together alone. Hmm, why is that? She had already been more career focused than marriage focused, and all but cut him off before "he" had the idea to open the marriage. So you begin the story with two people who probably shouldn't be together anymore, because they already lack (or never had), a truly equally displayed passionate love for each other. So instead of trying to figure out how to have a better connection with your spouse, instead of putting all of your energy into the relationship you are supposed to be committed to, you begin to cheapen yourself, reject your here-to-fore ingrained moral principles, stretch the limits of self-respect (exchanging the pride one derives from being a basically good person, with the adolescent thrill derived from trashy, meaningless, and empty sexual attraction). After pushing away what would have been normal feelings of regret, you convince yourself that the only way to save the same marriage you have eviscerated at its core, is to then take it to the extreme of Dom/sub fetish cuckolding. This was Tim's idea, after all, right? WRONG!!! All Tim wanted was more sex. He understood swinging. We BOTH have sex with others because then it adds up to MORE sex for BOTH of us. But the frustrating way you size up the inequality of him being able to attract willing partners as easily when compared to her, makes me cringe!!! OK, I'll follow your argument: ANY exposed pussy can find a willing cock to impale it, while not necessarily any exposed cock can find a willing mouth to suck on it, right?? So IF that is true (or true enough), shouldn't that motivate Lisa to realize the answer to keeping her marriage healthy is MORE attention to her husband? No, not for this bitch. He must accept the disparity, and maintain happy ignorance; just be happy for what he can get out of her????? Really? And this "saves" the marriage? Would SHE accept the same conditions under reversed roles? I think you tried to establish Tim as the "perfect" cuck with potential. Maybe being a selfish bitch helps to establish Lisa as the "perfect" hot wife with potential. But I'd really enjoy your story more if you helped explain these motivators for your characters better. Because even in what you have wrote so far, it seems like Tim shouldn't have as much of a problem (as Lisa and Nikki seem to think), in finding a woman who WOULD want a real relationship with him, and only him, and one where sex is never a weapon, and desire is tempered with thoughts of how to keep each other happy without the selfish guilt of always worrying "well what is in it for me?" What is wrong with expecting that ONE PERSON can be all you should need? Sometimes these stories show how involving others CAN help confused couples get to the point where they appreciate what they had at home all along, instead of taking it for granted, utilizing "the grass isn't always greener" moralistic gambit. But I have a sense that your story isn't a cautionary tale, as much as an intended celebration of broken people manipulating others for selfish gain and attention. All I ask of you, author, is to really, really, really take a hard look at what it is you want to say, and if you really believe it, and if you will have crafted your characters, plot, and dialogue, to convey that message? It will make the difference between readers hating Tim and Lisa, thus rooting for their demise...or feeling sympathetic to Tim and Lisa, thus cheering them on to figure it out, and return to a lasting love that is strong enough for BOTH of them to be willing to fight for it. Even the revelation that they would be better apart than together, creates a climax that might be worth wading through the dregs of inhumanity and over the top depravity to get to. But that she would be so willing to go for divorce, so soon in chapter one, doesn't give me a lot of hope for the evolution of dynamic emotional fiber to be lurking in chapter 2, but of course we never know. Interesting that in your bio, you mention your belief on relationships, in that they don't have to have equality between partners, as long as both understand and accept their role. You speak nothing of happiness, contentment, or love, as ingredients for a lasting relationship. Someone may be stuck in a dead-end job. Despite the fact that they HATE their job (and thus their life), they show up everyday, and do the assigned work. This employee understands and accepts their role, and demonstrates that to the boss, but they are not happy and would secretly give anything to have a different or better job. Your cuckold husband may have understood and accepted his role, but that is no guarantee his love for you will grow and expand-in fact it will most probably diminish. Confused and manipulated (controlled?), he will allow his wife sex with others, but he will always wish that he alone could be enough for you. Acceptance that he isn't and never will be, only serves to prove that denial of a divorce is just putting off the inevitable. Trapping someone in a broken marriage, is torture, and why? How is the sexual thrill of denying your husband the basic rights to his manhood, a proof of love? How many of the "studs-or real men" you seek out extra-marital sex with would put themselves in the position you are asking your husband to be in? If they would willingly trade places with cuck hubby, would you still desire sex with them? I've never read a convincing argument that sex with others helps to INCREASE desire for sex with hubby. It always comes across as part of the deception. You are lying to yourself, AND your husband, if you tout the "It is just sex with others, but it is 'making love' with hubby". In reality, having sex with him is eventually reduced to an exercise of guilt and pity. But REALLY, is pity sex with you and a few other sluts actually WORTH the price of eating creampies and emasculating himself? It isn't, and you'll have a long uphill battle to convince me otherwise. I mean, why would it be? But I sincerely hope you try! Despite attempts to get him to think otherwise within the framework of the manipulation, he CAN leave her, and he CAN find someone else. Even a celebrated wimp/cuck author like Matt Moreau won't let his small dicked men be satisfied with pity sex alone. So who will learn the lesson here, Tim or Lisa? And what lesson is it that will be learned? If your object lesson is that a formally proud man can find excitement being a sexually submissive, then I WILL be really disappointed. If trauma, conflict, and despair get this couple motivated to fix what is and has been broken for a while now in their relationship, then I will congratulate you on a success within this volatile cuckold genre. If you continue to show stripes as self-confessed bitch and man-hater, then well, I'll just give up on your writing (although, so far not much of your writing has held any lasting interest for me). I guess we will see......

swingerjoeswingerjoeabout 10 years ago
Insightful

What an incredibly insightful description of an open marriage and a Dom/sub relationship between a husband and wife. Thank you for sharing this story, and I hope there are more to come.

Zed56Zed56about 10 years ago
"For Tim the decision was fairly easy. ..

"The current situation wasnt working and a breakup seemed the likely end resul but he might as well enjoy a few kinky adventures first. They didn't need to be lifetime decisions just the right now decision. Tim has an out and looks like he will take it.Best sentence in the story.Gives it a shred of reality

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
This is a very hot story, thank you.

I can't imagine what anyone would think was wrong with the story, unless you just don't like cuckold stories. The story was well thought out, well-written, technically well-executed, a good introduction to and development of the characters and all in all, from the perspective of someone who has a cuckold fantasy, which of course I do or I wouldn't be reading such stories, wicked hot.

Now I've been reading stories here for long enough time to realize that there's some people who just plain don't like this type of story. If you don't like this type of story, don't read this type of story. To castigate somebody who has put as much effort as the author has here is just wrong. Either congratulate the author for a job well done, thank the author for putting the effort that they have put into it and/or offer some constructive criticism.

My fantasy is that my wife will take other lovers, and let me play along. If you have a different fantasy, read those stories. It's clear that the author put a lot of effort into the story and, in my opinion has done an excellent job. I thank him for his effort and hope that he will continue writing in the same vein.

By the way, if you're going to complain that I'm signing this is anonymous, I only did so because I wanted to get this written down and didn't have the time to open an account I will be opening an account tonight. Hopefully the name pleasecuckmehoney will be available so you will have no doubt of my fantasy. By the way having a fantasy does not make me gay or any less of a man than you. It does make me somewhat like Tim. Strong, confident, forceful, and really wanting a hot relationship with a very hot wife. I too have a very strong and dominant wife. We share that dominance, the times that makes life difficult. Reading this story about Tim has given me the idea that I should perhaps consider giving in to her having the role full-time. Maybe my sex life will get better, too. You never know, if you did something like this maybe you'd get laid too.

patilliepatillieabout 10 years ago
Wow anon great analysis & argument

Good job outlining your observations & subsequent analysis if this story! Well done

honey_licker1124honey_licker1124about 10 years ago
This is a very good story.

A study into how one couple got into the slut wife - cuckhold lifestyle. I'm sure there are other routes, but this worked for them. The beginning and set up of the story may seem rambling with the explaining of the law firm dynamics, but this eventually was woven into the story by Lisa's attitude. She is a "take control" kind of girl. She loved her husband enough to at least try the swinging club. He liked it but she not so much, but she learned what worked best for her. She just had to convince her husband what it was going to be.

Only a few word usage problems. I gave 5 stars.

I've bookmarked your other listings and look forward to reading them as well as it seems this is a dominant theme in your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
great again

thank you for another great story,..., I enjoyed it very much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Psychological...

The mind is the largest erogenous zone. You have done well to lead the reader to that understanding. A fine job.

vastiesmith2vastiesmith2almost 8 years ago
5

to offset the crazy fucking retard annony's 1 vote!

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopalmost 8 years ago
Lifestyle is interesting

Good story. Our relationship is different, but it works. Thanks 5 stars. Xoxoxo Annette

vastiesmith2vastiesmith2almost 8 years ago
ANNONY you mother and siter and yur enitre family belongs in a MX whorehouse

5 to offset this fag's 1 vote. Hey fuck wad go find a diseased cock and suck on it. Nurse it and get AIDS!!

vastiesmith2vastiesmith2almost 8 years ago
5

5 to offset this fag's 1 vote. Hey fuck wad go find a diseased cock and suck on it. Nurse it and get AIDS!!

vastiesmith2vastiesmith2almost 8 years ago
5

Annony your mother and sister and you should be in a MX whore house. Oh wait your mother and sister are already here,. Vote for this story and put this asshole of LIT's 1 vote mean less. Mean less like the old ugly fat fag he is.

NexttimeroundNexttimeroundover 7 years ago
Interesting

dialogue especially showing how the situation progressed -- or descended, depending on your point of view -- towards the totally asymmetrical situation at the end. This was hastened by the policy at the club, where single males weren't allowed. Would a single female be allowed? If so, then that looks pretty much sexual discrimination although I wouldn't bet on his chances in court!

The wife got to discuss, plot, and plan with a female friend, but he was without a male friend to plot with. The outcome was a power disaster for him as she just went ahead with her dates and he was left with the choice she gave him at the end.

I suppose the career situation discussed at some seemingly unnecessary length at the outset was to explain their different potential strengths and weaknesses. One is left with the comment that ultimately she either cared more for the lifestyle they were now in than the marriage if he had called her bluff in the final confrontation, or she correctly guessed he wouldn't walk out on her. If he had, then perhaps we would have seen yet another series of phone calls from wife who discovered she really did care after all to hubby who decides he needs to get away either temporarily or permanently -- many a story here has that happening. It can't be said too often about this..... be careful what you wish for, and it's usually the male who ends up on the floor literally or otherwise.

But well-written with a good emphasis on dialogue in a situation which is certainly completely foreign to me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
good story

but how is becoming a cuckold going to help with his jealosy ? also i am glad to see vastiesmith2 has been banned.

hungry4femdomhungry4femdomover 7 years ago
The Order of Things

Twisted. I'm betting that the people that give you such negative and ugly reviews see your writings as such. However, I am certain that they are actually the twisted ones. Most writers of like genres usually give a disclaimer, warning the potential reader of what the content will contain, to not proceed if any of the following will offend or upset, YET these people read your stories over and over and claim they are outraged or disgusted. The opposite is likely quite true. They are aroused to a level that they can't accept or even admit, yet they find themselves compelled to read more and more of yours and others' writings. Who is really twisted? You or I who love the genre and the lifestyle or the compulsive liar who denies their deepest desires and fantasies. It is they who long to be on their knees, begging to lick their lover's cum-filled pussy. They deny their own cuckold heart. That is really twisted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Jealousy

I don't think anything will automatically make the jealousy go away. But acceptance usually helps put it in perspective. A well managed cuckold will learn that the other men aren't getting anything more than he is; and his wife is not his possession to share or not. He will learn that it is not the other men that are superior to him - it is his wife who is sexually superior. Once that is established and he accepts he is more at peace. It becomes more akin to being jealous of a pro athlete's ability - you may wish you had that ability but the fact that you don't is so patently obvious that you realize there is no point dwelling on it.

MbgdallasMbgdallasover 7 years ago
Very u loving and caring wife.

Selfish bitch. That is all she is. She only cares about herself and will only give him what he needs so she gets what she wants. That is not love and is not a marriage. In reality this is a marriage on the rocks and not one that has much of a chance of surviving until she starts loving and respecting her husband.

It is so funny how the bitches in these stories talk about being a possession of there husband. Truth is a marriage is about possessing each other. It is a partnership and neither should have power and control over the other.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Possession

Personally I don't think marriage is inherently about possession for either party. But there is a long history of men treating women as possessions and many regard it as wank fodder - I see no reason therefore that the opposite can't be indulged.

lickitandstickitlickitandstickitabout 7 years ago
Pretty Good

I've read a couple stories on this author, usually I dont spend much time on the cuckold stories but these are well written IMO. I mean that whole female led relationship thing isn't for me, but its just erotica and fantasy to read. Even if others are like me and in real life would say Fuck You , i'm out of here, I simply see it for what it is, stories. The author does state she is the female in a female read relationship, If thats her thing and her mans thing, who the hell cares whats taboo. Its their lives. I'm not here to judge anybody for what they are into in real life. Anyway, that rant was for people complaining, if you dont like it dont read it.. I believe I will pick out another story from this author or read every single one of them.. Good Job. You're pretty good at this. So again.. 5 stars.

liz33ndliz33ndover 4 years ago

I struggled with your writing at first, but WOW, I am impressed and it almost sounds like this could be a real life way to keep a relationship in tact. thanks for sharing, and I hope to read more for future instructions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Superb and sublime!

I have read many, many cuckold stories and lifestyle accounts, and this is by far the best I have ever read. Just call me Tim!

OnethirdOnethirdalmost 2 years ago

Similar to the authors other stories, but I guess it isn’t my cup of tea. It just seems cold-blooded: women sitting around chatting while getting serviced? Why would a guy (or a girl) orally service someone who is not paying attention? I guess what is missing is the L part of the LW catégorie in most of these stories.

AmbulAmbul9 months ago

I really liked the story. The author worked very carefully to describe how a marriage could work when the wife is sexually dominant over the submissive husband. Since this is not the conventional relationship it can seem uncomfortable, especially for the man, but again the author has taken the time work through the problems in a sophisticated way that seems very realistic, and not just a fantasy.

AmbulAmbul9 months ago

In her “Slut origins” story the author wrote of a relationship that did not involve marriage and the possessiveness that traditional or conventional marriage entails. Without marriage the man could be cuckolded but without the overt dominance and humiliation that seems so common in cuckold stories. Without any expectation of possessiveness or commitment, the relationship that the author described was much more loving even as the woman took on other men as sexual partners. In that relationship the man was not ignored or ordered and even limited to eating cum-filled pussy, but was a live-in partner with full sexual benefits. It is much more difficult when the marriage has existed for some time and habits have formed; then the wife has to take more drastic action to change the rules for the benefit of both if they are to stay together. I really like this author’s stories, and her explorations into women’s sexuality and sexual freedom.

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