All Comments on 'Smile, You're on TV'

You're, not your. As a writer this is a near unforgivable mistake. Their our other various mistake throughput you're story. See how annoying it is?

... but YOU'RE spelling sucks ;( Three -- you can do better than this, surely.

So much for using Ginger as a spelling/grammar checker. Ran it through 3 times and it didn't find mistakes, neither did ms word.

This turned into an absolute nightmare. Blackmale of the worst kind.

You need to do your own proofreading. Just as your title used the wrong word, itself an actual word--but not the one your wanted, Anon also used the wrong word for blackmail. You also had a sentence with "nor ... he didn't" which thereby became a double negative. Nevertheless, your story was erotic and do keep going with it. But you do need to justify a "friend" taking such liberty with a "friend's" wife without getting punched out, if only at the end when he threatened them with the second video.

Spelling, grammar, really! When I want perfect spelling and grammar I buy a book.

Great story, I could picture this in real life. Part two would work for me. Especially if the mole on Gary's hand was the same as on the store video. Ha ha.