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Intrigued, Mia watched Rodin's mouth sag.
"She also said when you come to England to be with me you can stay with her. I'm sure she meant your father and her. I think she likes you darling."
"She's a little too scatty and...and..."
"Anything else to put you off?"
"Um, not really. Loves sex."
"Well, there you go. Oxford is only a little over an hour away by train from Paddington Station so we'll not be too far apart. I really think you should spend time with your father... and Dolly."
They talked on about Rodin returning to England with Mia and she learned something that she had thought about.
"You know of course that my father's title will go into abeyance when he dies because his three children are illegitimate, therefore the title cannot pass on to them. The title which is hereditary can only be revived if someone in his extended family manages to successfully claim the title?"
"I didn't know that but admit being interested but it doesn't mean anything to me and a title would sit uncomfortably with me."
"Me too. When he gave me a large sum of money I was required to sign papers renouncing any claims on his estate. I signed that happily and remain happy about that. The only think I really wanted from him was love and he appeared incapable of doing that. He gave me six hundred thousand pounds."
"Jesus."
"Language dear Mia! Yes, I shall resign tomorrow and look forward to returning to England. I shall also ask my father if he approves me changing me name officially to Archer."
"Oh, that is a lovely thought because he's made you feel you are an Archer whereas I'm the only one of the Link family who has stayed beside you."
"Darling, will you do something for me?" Mia asked, standing and bending over the table. "We can have coffee later."
Smirking as he came in behind his half-sister, stroking up his cock, Rodin said, "This is another reason to support my name change. Hereon, people suspecting we are fucking will know us as Mr Rodin Archer and Mrs Mia Link and simple assume we are unrelated. Your husband if you find one will never know either as your parents will not see the need to inform him, as they will assume you and I never resumed our scandalous sexual connection."
"Oh darling, you are so clever. Now push it up as far as it will go."
THE END
- COMMENTS
Rapier875almost 8 years agoBut a disappointingly abrupt ending.
It needs another chapter on their adventures in England.
BoiPussyalmost 10 years agoSadly this was horrid and depressing. From start to finish it all felt very mechanical and fake. No emotions or passion was felt by thine-self whilst I read these words. Everything was cold and articulate and the writing was without a doubt self doubting and confused in its own meaning. I feel as though the author just tossed all their thoughts, opinions, and ideas on to a paper without any critical thinking. This story would be much better with some emotion invoking writing, and more focused plot/point and "rolling out" the depth of the story rather then just throwing all that background at us on the first page. The siblings bond felt fake, this whole story seemed very lackluster and fake. So very different from the multitude of other stories I have read on this site. The only thing achieved by my time reading this was an intensive birthing of malice cupped emotions for such a disgusting and despicable mother, and the raging sorrows of the poor man who married such a cold bitch. I would call her a cunt, but she lacks the depth and warmth.
P.S. to whom it may concern I by no means am saying I would do better or are a better writer I am simply expressing my thoughts and feelings after reading and reviewing the above story. If this offends you that is unfortunate and now you must move on. There is no time to dally waddle here.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoThis is not literary (although EG is obviously sitting there preening as though it is), there are gaping plot holes, and a load of disposable word-brush instead of anything resembling proper story development; the author obviously feels he's too good to descend to the plane of us mere mortals and actually tell the fucking story, preferring instead to wind in and out of the plot holes as though it's some kind of literary device, and so we have this pointless bucket of dilute anus-leakage instead. No stars, there's nothing here to award a star to.
bigdaddyg123about 10 years agoThe story title is...well, not descriptive in the least. The sex between the main characters, Rodin Link (Archer) and his half-sister Mia Charlotte Link, was never consummated--their only sexual encounters (maybe a half dozen times at best) was a brief mention of Mia's tits (or boobs or breasts), and him ejaculating over her frontal torso.
Just to discover the name of the star character I had to read the first half page of Page 1 to discover his name as being Rodin--and any of the character's identification and/or any relationship involvements was maze-like and even zanier and crazy!
Every other sentence was a maze of misused, maligned words and incomplete thoughts; one needs an enigma machine to decipher scenes, character intentions and their thought processes. The context and theme of the story could have been good had the writing, details, inneuendo and faux sex scenes/acts been written with some feelings from the characters. All interactions between characters is icily detailed; in fact there is never any compassion between the siblings Rodin and Mia! There is limited conversations, over many years, between Rodin and Mia, but their relationship was more akin to them flirting with a fish in an aquarium!
