All Comments on 'So Far Away No More'

Like it so far

Another dumbass writing as if talking to me..... and then writing in present tense. Fucking horseshit AND dumb at the same time.

Plus it is atrociously written.

This has the potential to be a nice hot sexy story. A few pages is a better read than leaving us hanging with what might happen next. Maybe some reflection on how they got together in the first place and what happens now they are together again. Do they stay a couple? Do they have parents that might wonder what is going on and possibly get caught or does Mum figure it out and gives her blessing as long as she can join in? Maybe they make some babies too.

I hate stories when there written like that, and do not read.

To short and what happened to the first part of the story, did you not write it?

Hope you will build some history into the next chapter.

Maybe is is or gets pregnant.

Please add more chapters

would-be writers who try to pretend that the Reader is/was a participant.

Because I know I was NOT, the story stands as much chance of being believable as a snowflake stands in a furnace!!

prince of them all. His wife fucked so many men during their marriage she lived on cum. Then she died and he's mad that he never got revenge.

Good start. I would like to see where things go

More please!

What negative & rude people here. I would think more people would be encouraging to a new writer.

I liked the story, but it needs more details. However, it did get me interested to read the next chapter. Please tell us the history of the two characters and what happens next.