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All Comments on 'So I..Love You'

by violetsmokes

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
so so

There are other words and phrases besides "So" to begin a paragraph. Lose "so" and your writing will improve.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very Artistically Unique Masterpiece!

It is a Very Artistically Unique Masterpiece! NOBODY else could write this way! NO other story could impress me this much! Brilliant! You have my full vote.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice piece of work

odd place for it to end up... but yeah... liked most of it think the tension could have been raised a little more however... keep it happenin' Cheers Roj

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