All Comments on 'Soccer Mom and a Bully'

by afighter29

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RpierzRpierzover 9 years ago
Now THAT'S a story

THIS is the ending I wanted in the original.

KidG1000KidG1000over 9 years ago

well the original story played on taboo fantasies of being submissive and cuckolded and sexually bullied. all perfectly fine things to explore safely in a story.

Was this new story meant to satisfy a particular sexual peccadillo, or just serve as an angry response to the original?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Terrible ending. He should have castrated the guy and turned his mother into his slut and make her turn tricks for him. Better yet cut the guys cock off and leave him with his balls and turn him into a sissy cum slut. I love being a cum slut and wish my wife would let her friends cut my dick off.9A4D

joln321joln321over 9 years ago

He Confronts Colin, Tells Colin he forgives him. Without Colin knowing, he records his Questions and answers about why he always picked on him. Why he set him up, etc. Then gets Colin a beer or some drink drugged. Or whatever, Maybe sneaks back into the house and zaps them with a taser and ties them up in separate rooms, ties them up and administers a truth serum to both and records the Q & A. Then confronts his Mother with the recording of Colin. But you're right, She's not a good Mother. No real Mom would toss her own child out onto the streets. Especially when she's so perverted. that was a bit far fetched. My opinion

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Woohoo

I'm so fucking glad you did this his mom and Colin had it coming

hawk200377hawk200377over 8 years ago
glad you wrote this

I'm glad you wrote this cause the ending in the last one pissed me I have never been one who condones bullying someone rather it be real life or in a story cause even in a story you are promoting it and it is even worse when a mother decides and wants to betray her own son with his bully so this story of revenge was very fitting again thanks for writing it

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Thank you

I'm am very glad you wrote an alternative ending. Cases of bullying bother me to no end, and the fact that the kid never got a break from his terrible life was frustrating. This ending actually tuns out nice for the kid, and is really putting me in a better mood. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
A Parallel Storyline to the Alternate Ending!! (Perhaps)

(REVENGE1): After binding Colin and beating the shit out of him for a full confession while recording it all whilst waiting for his mother to arrive home, forcing another confession out of him for her own ears to hear.. Jessie would unveil several Black Dudes to rape the shit out of Colin, forcing his mother to watch while forcing his own Cock down her throat, while recording it all also..

(REVENGE2): After discarding Colin from their lives for good and sending copies of his mother to her Job, Friends and Family, leaving his mother traumatised into a deep depression for all she had attributed toward and the pain Colin had caused her son while Recording her for every kid at school to see, while continuing to Bully & Humiliate Jessie..

(REVENGE3): When Jessie's mother begs her son for forgiveness, and rather than forgive her he offers her an alternative to Prostitutes her, as a contribution toward his financial needs during college while studying Business & Accounting.. During this time she tries to seduce her son into incest, he refuses and wants nothing to do with her sexually, except for their mutual agreement and Jessie claiming ownership for the House she lives in..

(REVENGE4): As years pass by and Jessie graduates from College, his relationship with his father vastly improved, and his mother cured of her deep depression with her newly found lustful profession with her son as her Pimp.. Jessie attends his High School Reunion to find everyone snickering around him in the background about all the events surrounding Colin, his Mother, all the Recordings, the Bullying & Humiliation etc.. Jessie silences the snickering around him by standing in front of the crowd and confessing all the hardships he had endured during his years at high school surrounding Colin and his mother, the crowd grows tearful and Inspired by Jessie's brave confession.. As the night kicks off with everyone enjoying a cheerful night of drinking and dancing, Jessie makes an announcement and unveils a minute long edited version of the original recording with snippets of Colin's Confessions and Rape.. To Jessie's surprise everyone approves and cheers for him in their drunken state, telling them all they can receive a copy of the full recording including his mother for free..

The End...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
bang on !

This is the perhaps the best story I ever read! However you could have added a few details in the story like the mother's guilt over abandoning Jessie and he getting his retribution by psychologically hurting his mother making her pay for all she did to him! Making her realize that she was always a mother first! A message to all slut moms: understand the importance of your sons in your lives otherwise no one can save you a from a son's wrath if his nerves get big! You have lived up to your name bro A FIGHTER !

Dread111Dread111over 6 years ago

finally i just got done reading the first parts and was so angry, don't know why, and after i read this i got better. lol. Yet you should've added a part where he fucked his moms bully too and probably his sister if he had any his aunts lmfao.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

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MfkndragonMfkndragon11 months ago

Well it's different at least you wrote about the son getting revenge unlike most it's still not my cup of tea though for 1 just cause you started lifting weights don't mean nothing your dick isn't going to get bigger as far as lifting weights goes why it was a mute point if you took Martial arts classes and you had the mother and son bond completely destroyed and that's something that can never be broken

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