All Comments on 'Soft, White, Satin and Lace'

by butterflybridgette

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Joscelyn2tgJoscelyn2tgalmost 9 years ago
Interesting...

...and so very well written, you've created a lovely atmosphere, but looking for more character description. As well as more story, but it is a beautiful concoction you've started, hope you can find time to write more for us. 5 *. Cheers! --- Josie

BrendaNWBrendaNWalmost 9 years ago
very nice

Good story so far .. please continue you are a good writer

CindyAmourCindyAmouralmost 9 years ago
Lovely.

Gorgeous story. Xxxxx

SexymaxSexymaxalmost 9 years ago
Love it

Great start, can we have more chapters please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Way too short of a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

very good tale and ialso read the other story you wrote and found that a turn on as well

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