All Comments on 'Soldier's Paradise'

Thank you. Love these types of stories. makes for interesting read. Dam good detail

the only comment i would make about this story is write some more chapters to it progress there relationship maybe he chooses to stay with her maybe he takes her home with him maybe a second woman becomes involved who also breastfeeds him just for a few ideas

Lovely story.. The only thing I would've love more emphasis on the creampie. 19f here and I've been playing with myself whilst reading this. Lovely job.

there were great nonerotic details that were very interesting, but it seems like you put more work into those than the actual sex. i would consider lengthening the entire piece and adding more details to both the sex scenes and the normal sections.