All Comments on 'Someone Fucked My Mom'

Beautiful successful women of want the opposite in sex, to be vulnerable. This is going to be great.

Please stop. I can’t take any more. I see that this is your first (and hopefully your last) submission. Thankfully you made it short.

Not the worst start I've read but if you're going to write a story then write a fucking story. This is not a story, it's barely an intro.

Hey Moron, there is a simple solution - if YOU don't like it, DONT READ IT

Trash.

Looking forward to see where this is headed. Great start.

Take no notice of self obsessed idiots who contribute nothing themselves. It has potential so carry on and develop the story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Fat loser. Does he not know what sex is or doesn't think mom is having sex I mean is it fuck I mean it's fucked up that the guy piss on his flower but come on really just stop writing pick another story

Find someone to proofread for awkward phrasing.

"You would be probably right."

Reads better as.

"You're probably right."

And from fhs sound of it, he's being direct and honest, so it might be better as.

"You're right."

Many years ago...this was me.

Until one day,a girl came up and said I'd look good with lesser fat n more toned muscles...1 year later...girls and women, I had no problem bedding them...

They can't like or dislike it if they DON'T read it. Dumbass.

Well it’s not really her fault. Of course she’s a mom and suppose to love her child unconditionally but most women love their cunt more. It’s why they are the lesser sex.

He didn't walked out with a baseball bat and explained to the guy why pissing on his flowers is a bad idea, which means that in next part he will be sucking guy's cum from his mum's asshole.... which in turn makes you another mentally ill cuck lover.

You spent more time describing the dudes cock than you did them having sex and his mom

Please don't write any more you suck at it

The making is a sissy

I’m sorry but this is a horrible start. Seems like your leading to where the son gets sodomized by the mom’s boyfriend while she watches or some shit. I can’t really see where this could go that could possibly salvage this storyline. I hope this short story does not reflect the culmination of your talent. If it does then you have no future in writing.

I loved the madness and find it wonderful to read this and I will be a bit disappointed if you don't have a future story about how you get on the bed with your mom and her lover and assume the same manner of your whore Mom. Hold her hand and she will be a very beautiful slut while she is butt fucked. I want to see you holding her panties as he ejaculates on Meagan. Use her panties and wipe the cum off your mom and find out how good it is for a son to embrace the madness and the perverted men who use her as a cum bucket. Slapping your mother's tits as she cums or laying down in the wet spot for her to see what she thinks of you

Can't wait to read the succession

Wow, I just read the comments. Looks like you and I have met some of the same anonymous ones. I liked your story. You’re off to a good start. Having someone doing a quick edit might be a good idea. Before posting mine, I record them aloud and edit as I do so. When I play them back, I edit again. I’m looking forward to reading more from you.

my god, that is hot. I love the thought of their relationship

I don't know where you want to take this to but for me it was too short. The sex scene is barely two sentences. Your idea might be hot but what I want to read about is sex.

I like the concept and I like the realistic premise. Mom is divorced, horny, thinks son is gone... please dont turn this into some unrealistic shit-show where the guy holds his mom's hand while she's getting gangbanged like some people would like! Keep it realistic, that makes it hotter. The one thing where realism fails is the guy. Huge cock, douche bag, talks like he's some dirty sex instructor... he is just a walking stereotype. Also, please, do something about the grammar. It hurts my eyes. Overall decent start though!

concept good. diction too wordy

This story IS FULL OF NONSENSES!Why on Earth would we "be probably right" if we call the son "a parasite",only because he is living with his mother and didn't move out?!This is RUBBISH!A LOT OF KIDS LIVE WITH THEIR PARENTS and THIS DOESN'T MEAN AT ALL that they are "parasites"!Then,staying "in front of a computer playing video games" CERTAINLY DOESN'T MEAN that the one who has such a lifestyle would "gain extra pounds and become fat"!SOME PEOPLE MAY become like that,exactly as SOME WON'T GAIN ANY POUND AND PUT ON WEIGHT!

Also,the thing with the guy who pisses on that plant at the end of the story IS COMPLETELY UNREALISTIC!A MAN DEFINITELY CAN'T "piss for 45 seconds constantly!Humans piss FOR ONLY 20-25 SECONDS constantly!Also,if that plant "wilted" IT WAS ONLY BECAUSE OF THE URINE,since A PLANT CAN TAKE A LOT OF WATER WITHOUT ANY PROBLEM!On the contrary,WATER IS GOOD for a plant! STOP WRITING SUCH UNREALISTIC NONSENSES and WAISTING OUR TIME with them!

Bitch hurry up.im waiting for next part 💜

Are you dead or are you going to continue this ?

Don't care for this kind of story hate the domination of a woman and where is the incest???????????????????

Beautiful fantasy! Please, bring us more and never stop. All haters, can go and f*** themselves.

That wasn't incest that was voryer you really need to learn that so I'll tell you incest is when you have sex with a blood related family member rather it concentural or not though I don't wanna think about the not and voryer is where you watch someone else having sex now that you know what they both are I suggest next time post stories in the right category and don't try to pretend his mom knew that her son would have come home that night even if he did go to the party and still chose to be a slut in the main room if I was the son I would have asked about the flower just to see what she said then if she lied called her a lying slut

Betting this was a non-fiction story.

1st person Awkwardness pretty much confirms that.

Proof reading is necessary to get rid of awkward parses as pointed out . Was really looking forward to this developing into at least part two and maybe more. Missed opportunity here.