All Comments on 'Something to Cheer About Ch. 02'

Is this Samual X writing under a different name ?

Probably Samual trying to get new life out of his works

I aggree with the previous posters

...who would want more of this pathetic shit.

A shitty story

Good lord, what utter crapola!!

Shitty story

i liked it.

Develop writing more, emphasize what needs to be emphasized and kinda make people distinct from each other, other than skin color and dick sizes

As I have said before the work that you have done is a very interesting story. I can tell you, that you have a great deal of talent, however instead of doing a quick story, you should include a great deal of sexual descriptions (insertions, moaning, grunting, etc). Because if you do this, can assure you that you will make the hotlist of top stories. Please don't listen to people who probably have never written anything, and only have alot to say.

Samual X's brother perhaps - same vein same crap

First off first type your story in Microsoft word or the mac/linux/unix equivalent and run spell check then copy paste the post. I found this refreshing from part one. Moving from obvious black customers only is a plus. Also I enjoyed the greater detail then "various sex acts."

I will say this; I am also against the idea that by any means of ministrations that a truly unwilling partner, like Mandi, will have an orgasm. There is a reason why Rape is taken seriously. I know this is basically in the rape section but rape victims/survivors do not have orgasms during the sex.

I would have enjoyed it more if the cheerleaders had not cummed. Even if one was beat and learned for the first time that this rough sex was for her and was truly enjoying the sex at the end, however I concede it is a matter of taste.

I liked the idea, but the first one was better. Your technique still needs work. Keep writing.

I would like to know what happened to the other 6 girls.

This is an excellent story so far. The other people who wrights bad things about your story, would not know a good story if it was looking at them right in there faces.

you have a great story plot with great framing, only thing is the juicy details. pretty good descriptiveness on mandy, but the first really lack, i look fwd to reading rest

can't wait to find out the fate of the other girls!!!

Very good, can;t wait to see what happens to the remaining 6.

better than the previous one, write more please

I like this story and am very anxious to hear the remaining parts

I love this story. wonder what's going to happen to the other fucking bitches

can't wait for next chapter how about 2 women get involved with 2 of the remaining cheerleaders