All Comments on 'Sophie's Awakening Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
great

next chapter please

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good Story

We want part 2.

Thanks

MunchDKMunchDKover 6 years ago
I loved it

It was a very nice first chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nice ,good start

A nice loving couple.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Build your story ...and they will cuuum !

You may have a great story here happyalex, if you continue with that Art full mind you have going for you, and slowly build this story, by adding hidden true to life, deep down layers upon layers of feelings, of untouched Taboo desires and emotions to your your characters.

You are Master of Erotica ...if know how to keep Sophie a Lady, to the very End

Thank You... for giving us Erotic foreplay for the MIND !

~ Alx

susieblueeyessusieblueeyesover 6 years ago
I enjoyed it!

I love being restrained and blindfolded, submitting to my man however he desires. I would prefer another man was involved instead of the baby sitter. I think any woman who has enjoyed being fucked by two cocks would agree :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
been there, done much the same

interesting and well executed

tborulestborulesover 6 years ago
Great start, really enjoyed it!

I love the teases about the babysitter, although the focus was on pleasure if the wife. Can't wait for more. Agree too that with the blindfold an additional male would be hot too.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Alex ain't just happy, he sounds positively gay.

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