All Comments on 'Sophisticated Mom To Cheap Slut'

i read part of the first page.saw there were 8 pages and if like 1 they would be pure rot. go and learn english.

This reads like you ran it through a language translator. I could not get past the first page. If that is the case then I am sure this probably reads better in your native language, but it just doesn't work in English. I didn't rate this...didn't seem fair.

This is a very poorly written piece garbage. I will avoid this author in the future.

It is strange that a large majority of the Indian writers write about other guys fucking their Moms.

the ugliest story i have ever read in my life

Very well written. Please write part 2

I was far too distracted by all the errors to concentrate on the story.

If this is an indian fantasy I understand why there are so many ghastly rapes.

Banal, boring narrative. Very dull writing style.

good one when is the next part coming.

i enjoyed the whole story imagining amudha as my dream mom NAGMA...wow....i love the way u degraded her...mainly with fisher man and beggers was best...pls continue..i also want to involve in the story writing pls...love to see her fucked by street hijras and some gay action too .

dilipsexist :

I was browsing through stories in the section by Indian writers.. i noticed that one "amita_4u " is having same thinking as you - read this : http://www.literotica.com/s/secrets-of-a-desi-mother?page=3

Will react on your story once i finishes....

Bahut mza aaya. mai apni mummy ko imagine kar ke story padh raha tha

I'll have to leave one here. You’re one sick ass motherfucker. I'll give you a one on this one, too, for posting that piece of shit. I'll be giving everything you write a one. I won't read it, just give you a one. Pussy move, dude, deleting the other comments.

The comment section was meant for readers to post constructive feedback/criticism, not so anonymous wimps like you could berate people who are providing a free service that you aren't required to use. If you don't like it and aren't willing to be helpful, move on.

You don't see complete strangers walking up to you at your job, yelling obscenities and telling you how you suck do you? Maybe you do. "Hey moron! I ordered fries with that!"

I like to use my mom in same way. Best story ever

Hey anonymous asshole. I respect negative criticism. But yours is not a criticism but just a rant by dick less faggot who hides behind anonymity.

In both my stories, at the beginning, I have written what to expect from the story. If you don't think it is your cup of tea, you should just shut the fuck up and get on with your life. If you write down comments like an elephant shitting out poop, I don't have to keep them on this page. If you don't like this story, go read some other story. Life is so simple

This is the best and the most hot story I have ever read in my life. I cummed a lot as well as leaked a cpl of time. Thanks

That was nasty hot.

I imagine her as a pornstar Amy anderssen..What a great slut she is..

I can feel her situation.

But why didn't her son give Amudha his shirt to cover herself before let her going naked to the public toilet Infront of beggars?

Pls put a gay tag....fuck....destroyed my fucking mood...i went soft...god, fuck this shit.

The writer seems to think that he could insult readers with this semi-literate stuff

If you feel offended by comments do not afflict the readers.

Add more parts of this,The best story ever ,you are the best Indian story writer,please right more