All Comments on 'Sorority Ch. 01'

by Jedikool

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Good start

An intriguing start to the proceedings. I'm eager to see where you're going with all this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Miss leading to me

I didn't know there would be other chapters, I guess there will be as there was nothing exciting at all in this part of the story.

GeeTeeOhGeeTeeOhover 16 years ago
Not bad

Look forward to more.

Bit much that they all have a big rack, but .... perhaps that's how the selection process is done.

One very minor point - English people very, very rarely say, 'overseas'. We tend to say, 'abroad'.

JedikoolJedikoolover 16 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments :)

Hi, i know taht not much happens in this chapter, but it is a seral, so there will be other chapters. And as for the big bobs, well, i like big boobs ;) But seriosly, not ALL the charactors do. Brandi, Raven, and Kate all have modestly sized breasts. But anyways, thanks for the comments!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Love it

I am a woman, and I enjoy stories such as this one, where it isn't just sexsexsex the first chapter. I like to have dialogue in the story, and I like it to be talk,minor sex, talk, talk, then a huge sex scene. So far this story has lived up to that

ptebadenptebadenover 7 years ago
Waiting for something to happen

We'll see. By the time, at least, pretty girls.

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