by Jedikool
An intriguing start to the proceedings. I'm eager to see where you're going with all this.
I didn't know there would be other chapters, I guess there will be as there was nothing exciting at all in this part of the story.
Look forward to more.
Bit much that they all have a big rack, but .... perhaps that's how the selection process is done.
One very minor point - English people very, very rarely say, 'overseas'. We tend to say, 'abroad'.
Hi, i know taht not much happens in this chapter, but it is a seral, so there will be other chapters. And as for the big bobs, well, i like big boobs ;) But seriosly, not ALL the charactors do. Brandi, Raven, and Kate all have modestly sized breasts. But anyways, thanks for the comments!
I am a woman, and I enjoy stories such as this one, where it isn't just sexsexsex the first chapter. I like to have dialogue in the story, and I like it to be talk,minor sex, talk, talk, then a huge sex scene. So far this story has lived up to that
We'll see. By the time, at least, pretty girls.