All Comments on 'Southern Belle'

Enjoyed the story of Cindy and her brothers immensely!

Good job.

I'm fascinated to see where this goes.

Very hot story. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Excellent start. You do plan to continue this, don't you? Although I usually don't like to tell another author what to do with their stories, I personally would like to see Missy brought in for a foursome with the girls getting involved with each other while their brothers recouperate.

that was amazing please continue, that was just so erotic. i have two older bigger brothers, and i could so see myself doing the things mentioned in this story, it was amazing, great job

I can't wait to read the sequel! Bring it on.

I always come back to this story hoping for a sequel! More please!

I loved it LilaB. When do we get the sequel?

Wonderful sex story of family love. Really enjoyed the interacial part, too.

Very sensual story with a sexy lead!

I loved the story. I really liked the time setting. Keep up the good work.

I'm sorry to see this hasn't bee continued. It's very well done on top of being HAWT!!

EXCELLENT!! Can't wait for part2.

Your story is really exciting and titillating; makes me all hot and bothered, silky wet and slippery, too. So, please do continue with it. There's nothing quite like a hot younger sister with older brothers story - well, except maybe a hot daddy/daughter one. *wicked grins*

Looking forward to reading more of your great works, and especially more of Cindy/Bart/Julian's escapades.

PLEASE CONTINUE I THINK THE SENATOR SHOULD GET MELODY PREGO AND JULIAN SHOULD OF GOTTEN CINDY PREGO AND NOW MISSY CAN NOT BE LEFT OUT

Please we need to know what happens does Melody find out does their father find out does Cindy get prego??!?!? What happens next does everything fall apart with her brothers and she ends up marrying another of her beaus?

Well, I'm back again and wanted to see if you had a sequel here. Although I do not usually like the earlier time periods this story actually changes my mind and has become one of my absolute faves. Please do come back with a sequel that is as titillating, erotic, raw and passionate as this first installment.

Now, excuse me, I need to go crawl back in between my "Bart" and "Julian", This made me all hot and wet again. *WG*

You should really write a sequel to this story. Period! This is one of the best historical pieces on this site.

Please write more.

I love this era! And although I'm more a daughter that fucks (Big) Daddy girl, I clicked here because of the title thinking I'd just skim through and probably just click right back off. Mmmm, I'm glad I stopped by! I've never wanted to fuck my brother but I could see fucking Cindy's! I was carried along gone with the wind reading this story! Although I'm more a maple colored with natural shoulder length hair I know if I was as I am now, I was surely fucking massa as good as it gets! After all, I'm still fucking a white brother in real life! I love your rendition! and I will keep this story in mind with the rest of my imagings of this time in our history.

You've done a fine job of writing these characters!

With Cindy getting fucked by her two lusty brothers and with all the creamy semen the boys are carrying around in their young balls, her young twat's going to be sperm-logged for sure. I noticed the comment by the young lady who wrote "OMG." She's got two older, bigger brothers, and she's real interested in what they've got swinging between their legs. Innocent child. Doesn't she know that her brothers are at least as interested in what she's got waiting for them between her legs? Plenty of brothers are real eager to introduce their big stiff prick to their kid sister's adorable little coochie and unload their heavy balls up sis's cute little twat. Just give the boys a wink and a nod, sweetheart, and you'll be getting as much stiff brotherly cock as you can handle.

Sure wished there was a sequel!

Don't bother to continue

Charles' (Charles's )

Senator (senator) (2)

one (of) the

EVER going to face Bart EVER again

dinning (dining)

aureoles (areolas)

(-as) his mouth feed on her nipple

shinning (shining)

he slide more (slid)

tight cant (cunt)

mind numbing (mind-numbing)

sister in law (sister-in-law)

Mama (mama)

Daddy (daddy)

I've know Missy (known)

any time, any where, and any how (anytime) (anywhere) (anyhow)

all about (it)

twinned (twined)

it suddenly dawn on her (dawned)

Papa (papa)

sorry for they delay (the)

was at her element (in)

slacked (slaked)

Get this teacher of English, no on, no one wants or cares for your list of errors!! Only you do this and only you care. Get a fucking life!!

This was too hot not to have a sequel.

this was amazing!!!!!

Good premise.

But sex is too automatic. No reluctance at all. Needs some really extended buildup and foreplay before getting to the main event.

And boy, do you need an editor/proofreader.

Three stars.

please please please continue

Please finish this!!!