All Comments on 'Space Whore'

Not erotic at all.

Its not even slightly erotic

No one is SUPPOSED to like this story. Other than Rita's masturbation, there is no redeeming value to it. That was really the point of writing it, to hold up a mirror to people and show them just how vile I think mainstream porn really is. If I were to ever continue the story, Rita would get a laser pistol and disintegrate every mother fucker that got in her way, free all the other prisoners and run mutiny on the bridge. Take the ship and do something really cool and beautiful with her new vessel with any of the poor souls she liberated, who would like to stay on board.