All Comments on 'Spanish Seed Ch. 03'

Very happy to see you continuing this series. Hope there will be more chapters coming up and a final resolution and explantation of the power of the seeds.

Also, you might want to consider submitting the story to the Erotic Mind Control Story Archive (www.mcstories.com), a free site which is the premier mind control story site on the internet.

You have set up a number of interesting puzzles - why are the white seeds having different effects, why is all this working anyway, what is the dream on the doctor's couch about and, of course, what happens if the hero takes a second black seed?

Time for Part IV I suggest!

Max