All Comments on 'Spanking Ann Ch. 02'

I couldn't enjoy it

As far as the writing, names were interchanged once or twice. Typically happens when a writer is rushing, knowing what wants to be said, but writing story can’t keep up with thoughts, reread draft prior to publishing.

On the fun side, I love reading erotic spanking stories, thinking about setting the seen in my mind and wishing I was in the very room with the participants. Love Jenny’s domination using the leather paddle on her friend.

Choose a path for Ann but make sure you stay true to the storyline as you have Kate who is interested in dominance and sex while Jenny appears to be more interested in playing a disciplinarian. Both are fun roles as I myself enjoy being in Ann’s role. Looking forward to reading more.