by merf68
This is a fine example of erotic literature (written in British English for a change) You have incorporated BDSM, incest and erotic couples as well as a variety of fetishes. Thank you for a truly enjoyable experience, one that could be enriched by adding John and Jane. Well worth five stars - pity it can’t be more!
A thoroughly intriguing story that started out as Erotic Couples, the shitfed to BDSM, and then came home to roost with recollections of Dad and fantasy fulfillmennt with Mom. The only thing missing was rolling in the two kids to keep it all in the family and incestuous pregnancies. Looking forward to the next chapter.
How about the kids get involved and the son is a very strong dom and takes control.
You really must bring us Chapter 2 soon -- this was amazing. Thank you so much for sharing -- five stars.
I can see this developing into adding the kids to the party, so to say!