by SteveLee1146
Very erotic story. Good ending. Other than involving Rod. Maybe he would like fucking his daughter? His son-in-law fucked his wife.
it never came true. years past since but the fantasies were so intense that i remember them better than many events.
In my next life i will spank and fuck my mother in law!
Meanwhile i shall read spanking stories!
THIS STORY: *****
It never happened. The story reminded me of how intense the fantasy used to be.
I enjoyed your writing - and will look for more of it.
A concise and fun story marred by two things for me:
Use of the occasional over-the-top word like "vituperation" and running a complex philosophical argument in the story justifying a certain level of violence in a relationship can be erotic and ok, so as to not promote bullying or domestic violence.
While I agree in fiction, I don't in reality. The spankings I've been involved in have all been erotic, adult and consensual. In any case, the philosophy might be better put in the intro as a note to the reader.
I was surprised that with the argument above woven into the story, you missed an obvious explanation for the daughter's placid state: endorphins. When spanked, part of the joy is endorphin release. Makes for a light buzz.
Please keep writing, but leave out the unnecessary big words, they act as a speed bump and distraction.
You are an excellent writer. This had the perfect blend of spankings and sex. I enjoyed this story very much.
Superbly well written. Always wanted to do the same to my mother -in - law.
Really liked this story. Spanking, incest, woman with woman. Great
That was well written, good vocabulary. It was exciting, but your writing was notable.