All Comments on 'Spawn Slave'

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sadlittlelostboysadlittlelostboyover 14 years ago
Lovely!

Lovely!

I'd like to read more about why Jennifer has been remade this way.

Great start, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
You need to get your character's name sorted out...

She starts off as Jennifer and then turns into Jessica - it really grates.

LunaWindLunaWindover 10 years ago
Almost 5 stars, but...

The character name change (Jessica/Jennifer) is an annoying error that should have been corrected before posting. The same with the errors of the word to/too/two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Main character started out as Jennifer and then becomes Jessica

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You need a spell checker

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