Splitsville - Alternate Ending

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"Oh .. that was so mean. Shit, I'm wet from listening to you. Maybe some day won't be so far away."

We spent a few days with Julie settling in then we went back to our long range planning. With all the family together we didn't have to stay in this area but we decided to stay near our friends. The state needed funds and reluctantly put the state forest up for sale. We now own 2600 acres of trees and have put a few trails through. The trees go nearly right around the lake with only the few cabins on the access road. Bought those also and built a few more with other facilities. Advertised and found a manager with a family who is running it as a nudist resort. So to get to our place you have to go through the resort, sort of guarantees our privacy. They have access to the forest trails and we can always find pickers for our 10 acres of blueberries.

Julie was the first to get pregnant, not a son but still named Ronnie, Beth was next with twin girls, Rachel and Rhonda, Donna had twin boys, David and Seth. Round two started with Beth having another set of twin girls, Sue and Carmen, then Julie had two boys, Chas and Pete. About this time we completed the extensions to the extensions. Donna had her twin girls, Bobbie and Monica and that was enough for a while. Eleven children in six years filled the house with laughter. We wanted to hire a few staff and were lucky enough to hire a family with two high school age girls that are ok with the dress code.

To close this tale, I'd like to take this opportunity to thank Shirley, don't know where you are, or what you're doing, and really don't care. But if it wasn't for your cheating ways I would never have found this level of happiness.

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PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19817 months ago

Both was too much to grasp only good part was the sister and brother action and sister and niece action but was killed with the mention of anal sex told me the mc is gay also killed it with daughter and dad incest

KahunabobKahunabob12 months ago

Liked this one better - though Ron probably didn't have to be killed off. Poor bastard. Suggestion for future stories: take it a tad slower. Felt a bit rushed in places. A bit rapid fire / staccato. For instance: why were the twins so down to get down with dad in the first place?

mrdata9770mrdata9770about 1 year ago

(I2/19/2023) This ending was much better. Babies gotta have more babies. Nothing like a pregnant woman walking around the house barefoot while only wearing your dress shirt. But I also need to say that I would have liked to have read more about Shirley and the captain. More substantial villains would have made for a sweeter ending. Still, I gave this narrative five stars.

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

The revised ending definitely was a better storyline as it brought a happily ever after to the whole family. Eleven kids, wow that is one big family. Story was well written and had a great conclusion. Well done 5 stars.

Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

A good story. I truly enjoyed it. AAAAA+++++

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