All Comments on 'Sports Bar Pickup Ch. 01'

Good start, can't wait to see what happens

Please include a small amount of domination... a bit of being tied up.. fisting and rimming. My beautiful blonde girlfriend had an affair with a dominating dyke and would come home and tell me what they did... I would love to relive those moments..

do tell

There were brief glimpses of promise in this, but it was mostly another story of two girls walking into a bar. Not very imaginative.

Wow, really promising start... and I'm sorry that there's not more now, but I'll wait...

An extremely well written start to what must become a exciting fantasy of 2 women's lust for fulfillment. i like the end as it leaves room for so much more rather than being hastily finished.

Congratulations. A+++++++++++++

Tara moves to New York and finds things very dull. Determined to find some Friday night action she goes out to a Sports Bar and while there meets Kim. Soon the two find the common thread and pursues their choice of sexual activities.

Good Read! Well Written!

Wanted to read on and was sad to see it is part 1 only!

Val:

One story; one victory. Well done.

-- One of the "pretty shady looking older guys"

A great start lets read more The bar scene was great how big was Taras breasts and Kims breasts ?

Pat

Atlanta,Ga.

keep up the fine work; I want to hear more.

And where is that bar - maybe I will come find you, and her, too.