by PrestonMimiteh
What a marvellous story to get one hot and bothered! It certainly worked for me - thank you. Five stars.
The narrative felt a little sterile and removed, perhaps because it's told from a third-person perspective, rather than from the POV of one of the characters. An interesting idea, but it never pulled me in and made me commit to the characters. And so I stood by while they went through the motions.