All Comments on 'Spring Plaza Hotel'

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 11 years ago
Wow!

What a marvellous story to get one hot and bothered! It certainly worked for me - thank you. Five stars.

Remain_in_shadowRemain_in_shadowover 11 years ago
I never felt the passion

The narrative felt a little sterile and removed, perhaps because it's told from a third-person perspective, rather than from the POV of one of the characters. An interesting idea, but it never pulled me in and made me commit to the characters. And so I stood by while they went through the motions.

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