All Comments on 'Squirt and Her Cousins'

by rbenne

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Continue

Good story, well written and hope to see it continue with the other cousin joining in.

verybigoneverybigoneover 14 years ago
can't wait to read more

I hope there will be more to the cousins having fun

JohnnyMaxJohnnyMaxalmost 12 years ago
Quite good

Work on your spelling and a few factual problems. The Hymen is at the entrance not half way in. The Pill needs to be taken for a full month before it is effective- not one day.

The story itself is pretty good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fucking stupid.

She arrived home after three in the morning and went straight to bed suffering from an overdose of marijuana and alcohol. I did not get to see her before Friday evening.

You can't overdose on marijuana. Physically impossible.

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