All Comments on 'Squirt and Her Cousins'

She arrived home after three in the morning and went straight to bed suffering from an overdose of marijuana and alcohol. I did not get to see her before Friday evening.

You can't overdose on marijuana. Physically impossible.

Work on your spelling and a few factual problems. The Hymen is at the entrance not half way in. The Pill needs to be taken for a full month before it is effective- not one day.

The story itself is pretty good.

I hope there will be more to the cousins having fun

Good story, well written and hope to see it continue with the other cousin joining in.