All Comments on 'Star Wars: Ahsokas Chronicles Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Rushed

My main complaint about your stories is they seem rushed. Allow some time to build to the action. I think you have potential for some amazing stories but you rush them. Build some tension, you have the chops use them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Another

I think you should do another one

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
What now ahsoka what now

Please make a story of she getting to the bridge

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I did not realise how old these were, yes I agree that they seem rushed.

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